Bloody Mary: A Short Story
By Alexis Tiger
I would give 3 out 5 stars. (I know the process of writing a story.)
It was a simple and short story, a very easy and quick read. It was a bit too short. I kept wanting to turn the page to read what happened next.
I wanted to know the relation to each of the characters, were they friends since 4th grade or neighbors, etc.
However I feel it needed more. I wanted to know what happened to character after the horror.
The horror and murder description was pretty good. I wanted to know more of what the characters knew about the Legend of Blood Mary. (As each legend varies from place to place.)
Over all, it was a quick and nice read.
If you want a quick horror story based off an Urban Legend, then you should check it out.